Sunday, June 13, 2004

I got this challenge from a friend of my to write a story off of this story generator to prove I'm a good writer. Here's the confinds of the story:
A character uses a tool, but the action is misinterpreted. During the story, a character inherits an unusual object. The story must involve a throwing axe in it. The story takes place ten years into the future. During the story, there is a visit by an unexpected visitor.


And here's the story...

The year is 2014, and believe it or not nothing much has advanced in technology wise. The only difference is that everything is 10 years older. Cellphones are smaller and now comtain very small screens that show the face of person your talking to. Everyone seems to have one and nobody thinks their very wierd or out of the ordainary. Everyone has them, including the main character, a young man in his late teens. He is tall, slim and has brown hair with a blue strip on one side.His name is Derik Semolin and he's the proud son of the two of the town's most prominent officals; the mayor and his wife. His an average citizen with a slight problem with authority. He dresses very punkish with a chain and a shit without sleeves. The only proble with him is that he does not have a cellphone, even thought the goverment issues out one to every citizen. That is until he meets up with the first supporting character, a young girl of unknown age with light purple hair and strange green eyes. She stumbles out of the back a suspicious van and happens to bump into Derik as he makes his way to school. He carries the unconsience women back to his one bedroom appartment (which his parents help him pay for, and often make surprise visits to) and while searching for I.D. comes across a cellphone that he's never seen before. It's a braclet and instead of having numbers on the 12 keys, it was keys all over the braclet with strange symbols the likes he's never seen before. He puts the braclet and the strange girl sleeping on his couch suddenly comes to life and starts yelling at him to take the braclet off and in the confusion that follows they wind up in a very usuall position just when his parents show up for one of their surprise visits. The girl who Derik knew nothing about claims to his parents that he is, in fact, her boyfriend and although derik procliams that he's not his parents leave beleive that he has a new girlfriend named LeAnn. As the story progresses the strange girl gives a different name to every one she meets and a new name to Derik almost every episode.
Every espisode (at the beginning) the show starts by him being in someplace that different every time and his new braclet cellphone (which he can't get off) ringing which entails that some new foe has arrived from a place called "The New World" that his "girlfriend" defeats with her amazing powers like beams from her eyes and incredable strength. The series ends when his girlfriend (no quotes this time, by the end of the series they actually do like each other) disappears and another foe arrives. By the end of the last episode Derik has become so confused by the events that have taken place in the series that he cuts straight through the braclet with an axe, cutting his own hand in the process. With the braclet destroyed his girlfriend imediately comes crashing, backwards through his wall and falls ontop of the braclet (she was linked to it) when Derik comes to he's greeted by the familar face of his girlfriend who no longer has her amazing power or her memory... The end of the last episode (technically the end of the series) is right here, as it fades out the window the the hospital room as the main character monoluogues over the scene, "I don't know who she is or where she came from. And the events of the last year may never be completely clear to me, but i do know one thing. I'm never getting a cellphone."

Here's what my friend had to say:
IncandescentHalo: *claps* Beautiful, Mr. Writer!
Very good
really